Mr Keitel

Marlon Keitel was an alias, his real name was something completely different. But he didn’t tell anyone that, he was Marlon Keitel. He didn’t tell people why he had moved to Riverview. “I was looking for some fresh country-side air” was his explanation. And everyone believed him, Marlon was really good at convincing people. The real reason why he had left the city wasn’t one he was proud of.

Marlon came from a poor family and at an early age (14) he had joined the local criminal gang. Quite quickly he had advanced in ranks and came to know the leader and his closest men. Life was brilliant for young Marlon but one day when he was 17 he got caught by the police. The police intergatted him thouroghly and Marlon couldn’t hold it toghether. He told them everything and the gang’s leader and his closest men were arrested and sentenced to lifetime in prison. Marlon only spend three years in prison for his severe crimes. And when they let him out at the age of 20 he was certain that he was going to be killed. That’s the reason why he changed his name, he took Marlon Keitel intribute to his favorite actors, Marlon Brando and Harvey Keitel. And he fled to Riverview, the last place one would look for a criminal.

That’s the full story, Marlon was determinded to start a family here in Riverview and build a criminal imperium. That’s the reason why he bought the biggest lot avaliable. This was the foundation of his grand estate. But at the moment all he could afford was a bed, but after all it was a very nice bed!



3 Responses to “A Most Wanted Man, Ch 1.1”

  1.   iamberry Says:

    Ooo very cool idea! Your first chapter has definitely hooked me. Off to read part 2!

  2.   galacticgal Says:

    Interesting backstory for your Founder! Good start. I shall read more. :-D

  3.   Hanzie Says:

    Cool backstory indeed! Off to read the rest. :)

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